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please critique song

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Crash and Burn

I feel like nothing is working
Something inside me says yes
I just gotta believe in my self!
Oh
I keep letting my self down,
I need to keep, my spirit up
Now, if I do this, nothing will ever fell the same!

I crashed and burned
to the ground
some thing says this is not the first time
I keep, letting myself down
come on, get my spirit up!
like I said, I crashed and burned

I feel the same
ordinary,
why is this this way?
I just can’t help my self!
I need to work it, keep my spirit up!

I crashed and burned
to the ground
some thing says this is not the first time
I keep, letting myself down
come on, get my spirit up!
like I said, I crashed and burned

Come on!
Get your spirit up!
This is hard!
I know it!
You can do it!
Come on!

I crashed and burned
to the ground
some thing says this is not the first time
I keep, letting myself down
come on, get my spirit up!
like I said, I crashed and burned

I crashed and burned
to the ground
some thing says this is not the first time
I keep, letting myself down