looking for feedback firsttimmer

[hotshotred18]

(rose is the girls name) rose beauty on my mind  so you enter my thoughts  you looked so beautiful that night  we got lost in the dark  regret fills my head for not telling you from the start  i guess it wasnt fate for you to be in my heart  its just the way things go misery loves me

[Cordilow]

Looks decent. Just add some punctuation and formatting.

It seems a little dark (not necessarily an uplifting poem). Was that the intention? What do you intend it for?