This is called "I Still Love You" tell me what can be changed.

[DeeZy Ranks]

(verse 1)
i see u nearly everyday
but i miss u all the time
i dont know how to say this
so ill put it in this rhyme
when i first walk past and see you
i wave and try to smile
but what you fail to see
is the pain i feel inside
because whenever i pass you
i want to hold u tight
and never let go so we can
can fade into the night
and when the sun rises
your eyes will look so bright
and letting go will be hard
so i try with all my might
to keep my arms around you
and let you know im here
cuz after that when you go back
im not seeing you again
but ill always think of you
sometimes with a smile
and i hope that i'll see my baby
in my arms in a while
i know thats wishful thinking
and it kills me inside everytime
i think of you and i cant stop
to the point that tears come to my eyes
you know that i love you
and i think you love me too
which is why sometimes
im afraid to tell you the truth
its nothing serious so don't take it on
just a way to rhyme in this depressin song
and if u ever hear this
just know its about you
whenever i''m with you i melt
this is for you my sweetie
my baby gabrielle

(Chorus)
That was then but this is now
i feel the same but somehow
you dont and it hurts
and that i love you makes it worse.

(Verse 2)
all i really want is you
and for us to be
how we were before
when it was you and me
limin all around
wherever we could find
especially in the mall
and alot comes to mind
when i think of you
as my love thats lost
i will always love you
because love has its cost
but i dont blame you at all
because thats how it is
win some lose some
everything has an end
they were all cliches
before i met you
and now thats all i know
because it is the truth

(chorus)

(Verse 3)
i still love you gabby
even if only as a friend
i can never hate you
our love can never end
as long as i have you
friend or girlfriend be
the world will be happier
both to you and me
and if i were to lose you
as a friend then i would cry
because i never want to say goodbye
if ever you need to talk
babe im here for you
and no matter what it is
ill tell you the truth
i've never lied to you
and ill try my best not to

[CARTER J]

I would say change everything,

the verse is too long, you evoke nothing , I dont see one original line.

It's a mess it's not a lyric  it's boring cant think of any reedeeming factors here.

Best Matt