Silent Night

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Silent Night

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This song is about lovers and unlawful love. please comment it.

Silent Night

I can see your eyes
Dawn turned on lights
I can feel your body
More and more moody

I'm inhaling your breath
It smells of regret
I can't give you anything
While you don't say something

Show me something new
How I can reach my view
Show me something old
Like when we won the gold

Old is ten commandments of god
Then we can be soldiers in love
We will never be free
If we don't break the chains of steel

(Chorus)
In silent night
Only we are together
In silent night
Only our eyes shine

In vacant room
We are worried about our history
Is it approval or doom
Or dawn coming with new story

Your heart is stony
But your lungs need oxygen
Your body is thistly
And your hair is waxen

I want to relegate fears
But you can't stop tears
I want to turn back time
So that we don't have trouble tonight

(Chorus)
Tonight in silent night
Only we are together
In silent night
Only our eyes shine
In blind, deaf and dumb room
We don't need nobody's rules
And love will come in first plan
To link together our separate ways

(bridge)
I hope
You are really ready tonight
And you'll be knocking on my door
I know
You will leave your Lord
And you'll come on my bosom
I'll be waiting
For your knock, knock, knock
On the door of my love
And we will be together tonight
Tonight

(Chorus)
In silent night
Only we are together
In silent night

In blind, deaf and dumb room
We don't need nobody's rules
Between rough, stiff and black walls
We don't need nobody's laws

Even if you
Even if I
Even if love falls apart
Together we will touch the sky
And catch all stars above us

The sky of silent night
You and I together
In silent night

What's happened with you?
I want to know the truth
What's happened with me?
I say its a thrill
TheLizardKing

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I like your word usage but I think you should be more consistent with the syllables in each line, which would make the song more fluid. And maybe use a rhyme pattern like ABAB which seems to do better for songs