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LadyBard

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The only experience I have with script writing is taking stories I've written and
turning them into scripts.  I would like to start taking story ideas and writing them as
scripts.

Any suggestions to an absolute newbie at scriptwriting?

I see what's on t.v. and what's in the movies and I feel a very strong urge to write
screenplays.

Thanks !!
Cordilow

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I'm still pretty new to script writing, but I do have interest as well.

One thing I think might help, for starters, is to try writing a visual novel script, granted it's not the same thing as a screenplay, but you may find that this helps in transition at least a little.  They are written script-style, mostly.

Visual novels aren't graphic novels.  They're more like a mix between novels, video games, and movies.  Go to http://www.renpy.org/ and there you can download Ren'Py (free software for writing visual novels).  I might suggest trying out the demo (it helps you learn how to use it).

There are visual novels you can download there, too.
Dolphinia

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Well for starters there is way less information in a screenplay than there is in a novel, or even a short story. Your typical screenplay is between 120-123 pages long if that. There are different formats for television than there are for films. Actually depending if your writing a MOW, a blockbuster, straight to video, etc the actual screenplays of films themselves different slightly. In television as well as in MOWs' you have to allow for commercial breaks. You ever watch a television show that ends in a mini cliffhanger to go to a commercial, that's what I'm talking about.

That said here's the basics of a screenplay for beginners:

FADE IN:

INT. JORDAN FAMILY HOME KITCHEN-DAY

The small kitchen is not helped by the addition of an isle in the middle, an over sized stove, and the specialty refrigerator. The dark counters, bright walls, and ugly linoleum show whoever decorated this room has no taste what so ever.

Standing in front of the refrigerator trying not to bang the counters with the overly large doors is MARIA JORDAN; slight build, mid thirties, rough around the edges.

                                                 MARIA
                            Where is the ketchup?

                                                STEPHANIE (O.C.)
                            Did you look in the fridge?

Maria slams the door closed.
                                               
                                               MARIA
                           No I'm standing in the kitchen staring out the
                           window in the hopes that it'll raise it's hand
                           and say here I am.                          

So that's basically what the beginning of a screenplay looks like. The FADE IN: lets you know that this is the beginning, at the end you write FADE OUT:. The (O.C.) let's the director know  this voice comes from Off Camera. Writing (V.O) next to someones name means Voice Over, this is what you type if this person is narrating a scene.
You only have to put their names is all caps the first time they are introduced to the story so the director knows this is a new character, you want to add any quirks like scars or tattoos here as well. Later you can just type there first names unless you have two characters with the same name.
The first paragraph after the slug line is a description of the area in which the scene takes place, you can write that pretty much as dull or creative as you want as long as it gives a feel of what the place looks like. Be warned though if your screenplay is too dull or too involved you will never get past the readers to someone who can help get your film made.
The second paragraph describes the initial movements of the characters in the room, the last of which should be the first character to speak. After opening the scene the movements come just after or just before a character speaks. Another warning only write the movements that are absolutely necessary to the film because some Directors and Actors find it insulting when you try to tell them how to do their job. Basically what I mean is it's your job to write it but it's there job to bring it to life so let them add the quirks to the characters UNLESS they are essential to the characters part in the story.
When it comes to the look of the pages the more white a reader sees the better off the initial judgment of your script is. The reason for this is that screenplays are supposed to be to the point, without any inner dialogue or extra embellishments like novels. It makes you look more professional.
If you are writing dialogue and you come to the end of the page before that character has finished talking you write it like this.

                                                      MARIA
                            No I'm standing in the kitchen staring out
                            the window in
                                                      (MORE)

-------------------------------New Page--------------------------------------

                                                      MARIA (cont'd)                    
                            the hopes that it'll raise it's hand and say
                            here I am.

Sheesh I just realized how long this is sorry about that but I hope it helps somebody. D.
Dolphinia

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Sorry if the edits showed up in everybody's email I didn't mean for them to. If they didn't just ignore this. D.
Cordilow

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Cool, I think that is some very helpful information.

Do you have any tips on how to get the whitespace formatted correctly? Whitespace is just tabs/indents, spaces, carriage returns and such (it's a programming term). I noticed you had some stuff centered and some stuff indented to the center (but not centered).

Also, what are some examples of things that the director might find insulting? Is there often a fine line there?
Cordilow

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Don't fret. Nabble doesn't email the edits (just the initial post). So, if you get posts by email, it's often good to check the online version (as it may be more up to date). I'm not sure how edits work with feeds, though.

I know I edit my posts a lot—so it's good advice for mine, anyway.
Dolphinia

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Cordilow wrote:
Also, what are some examples of things that the director might find insulting? Is there often a fine line there?
    From my experience, and trust me it's not all that much yet, directors tend to extremely dislike when you add things like camera angles, to many character movements, state emotions unless they are not evident by the scene. What I mean there is if it's a sad scene and you write, they all cried, or something like that it tends to turn a director off because they know that. However if everybody's cracking wise and laughing but one character in the corner then it might be appropriate to indicate that this character is out of emotional sync with the rest of the scene.
    As for the fine line, again in my experience, it is a fine line. Like the above example you don't want to overstate the specific characters unhappiness. Also it differs from director to director.
    About the formatting give me a little time and I'll have the specifics for you. I just did it by ear on my previous post, I'll give you the actual numbers later. D.
Dolphinia

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Sorry it took so long to get back to you about the formatting but I actually had to pull out my books and look it up. I use Screenwriter 2000 and Scriptpro it does the format automatically so I don't have to think about it too much. Anyhow here we go:

The Slug line: (INT.MICHEAL's ONE-ROOM STUDIO APARTMENT-DAY) It begins on the left margin; 17 spaces from the left edge of the page.

Action Descriptions: One or two lines that describe what happens during the scene. It begins on the left margin; 17 spaces from the left edge.

Character Cue: The all cap character name over the characters lines. It begins 43 spaces from the edge of the left margin. A double-spaced line should appear before the character's name, but there should be a single space between the name and the dialogue or the parenthetical comment.

Dialogue: The left margin for dialogue is at space 28, and the right margin is at space 60 (do not justify the right margin). Try to avoid large blocks of dialogue that run seven or more lines. If your character needs to say more than can be fit into seven lines, add a blank line space between the text so it's more visually pleasing. (e.g. a fourteen line section of dialogue should be broken into two blocks of seven lines each.)

Parenthetical Comments or Parentheticals: These help the speaker of the dialogue know what emotion you intend for the delivery. These are short (one maybe two words)they appear under the Character Cue and before the Dialogue. I don't recommend the overuse of these as it can turn off a director or actor.  They begin 35 spaces from the edge of the left margin.

You need to leave 1"-1 1/2" blank at the top and bottom of each page. I'll add a bit more to this later let me know if anything is confusing. D.
Cordilow

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Thanks for the information!

So, what font and font size is traditional?
Dolphinia

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Cordilow wrote:
So, what font and font size is traditional?
Courier 12-point type.
Dolphinia

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Dolphinia wrote:
You only have to put their names is all caps the first time they are introduced to the story so the director knows this is a new character, you want to add any quirks like scars or tattoos here as well. Later you can just type there first names unless you have two characters with the same name.
I realized this might have come off wrong, at least it did to me so here's a clarification:
   You have to put names in all caps over each set of dialogue that a character is going to speak but you only have to put there name in all caps in the action description when referring to them for the first time, you know when they first show up. After that there name doesn't have to be all caps unless it's over there dialogue. Hope that clears it up a bit. D.