New the form wanting to hear other people's opinion's about my songs

[averagjo]

Hi I am new to this forum but I have been writing for years and I don't commonly share my songs but i wanted to see what other people thought of them so here goes


It’s all over but the Cryin’


Chorus

It’s all over but the Cryin’ and it has yet to begin
It’s all over but the Hurtin’ now that our love is at an end
Ya know I should of seen it Comin’ I should of known we’d never win
It’s all over but the Cryin’ so let the Cryin’ begin

1st Verse

Well our love was grand but now it’s long gone
Now that you left no need for me to carry on
I’ll sit here and wonder what all is left for me
Now that I’m all alone down in my misery  


Chorus

It’s all over but the Cryin’ and it has yet to begin
It’s all over but the Hurtin’ now that our love is at an end
Ya know I should of seen it Comin’ I should of known we’d never win
It’s all over but the Cryin’ so let the Cryin’ begin


2nd verse
I thought it was forever never to fade away
That you’d stay with me every night I’d pray
But my prayers went unanswered and you walked out the door
Now that leaves me here a justa walkin’ the floor

Chorus

It’s all over but the Cryin’ and it has yet to begin
It’s all over but the Hurtin’ now that our love is at an end
Ya know I should of seen it Comin’ I should of known we’d never win
It’s all over but the Cryin’ so let the Cryin’ begin

3rd verse

Well life goes on or so that’s what they say
Maybe someday another love will come my way
But till then I’m blue as the skies above
After livin’ through this tainted love

Chorus

It’s all over but the Cryin’ and it has yet to begin
It’s all over but the Hurtin’ now that our love is at an end
Ya know I should of seen it Comin’ I should of known we’d never win
It’s all over but the Cryin’ so let the Cryin’ begin
It’s all over but the Cryin’ so let the Cryin’ begin in in innn

[musikpoet]

i would be proud to cover this song with a rockabilly swing.

of course i would never do that. ever. not without your expressed written consent.

what i am trying to say is i really like your style and it's got a great hook.

very natural songwriting skills,

kudos.

[LiatrisPunctata4]

It's sounds like a country music song. It rhymes very well too.