Move On (originally posted by Troy)

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Troy

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Send Message Reply with this quote Reply to this Post Posted:  Feb 25, 2008 5:56 PM
No where to the sky
says I
No where left to roam
No looking back not ever
you see
No, step forward, move on
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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Feb 26, 2008 9:36 AM

    Troy wrote:
    No where to the sky
    says I
    No where left to roam
    No looking back not ever
    you see
    No, step forward, move on



Wow Troy, is this like a 2 persom poem?
or like, you're talking yourself into pressing on in life?

For such a short piece, it spoke volumes to me <3

Pleasures they be
not only me
but, for those, rest in between
To love a life
such as this
then, someone be truly missed...

Is that kinda like it?

Man, I'm really glad you joined<3 Delete Reply
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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Feb 27, 2008 3:06 PM
I like it.
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