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I’m Sorry
I struggle to find reason to see you,
Likewise I make peace and amends anew,
My heart condones my own jangly spirit,
The friends, her friends, call me mister misfit,
When this restless syndrome starts to attack,
This sweet agony tells me to look back,
I’m sorry you believed,
I’m sorry you were betrayed,
In the end,
I’m sorry you reached for the sky,
I’m sorry I was the reason why,
I’m battling the thought of seeing you -
My conscience knows me but counts on you too.
Your quiet soul knows how to play banshee,
As I quest for my sense of apathy,
My fear warns me - I may be mistaken,
The sad facts knock me down, please awaken.
(Chorus)
I need to see you brighter than the sun,
This journey has purpose oh please believe,
While you despise me, you are the loved one;
Now autumn plays fair, I’m your fallen leaf.
I bet you never thought you’d see this from me,
Hurt is deeper than this apology.
(Chorus)
