Hey, this is the first song I've ever written... and I'm totally stuck. Feedback needed :)
<Me - Spoken>
Screw that girl! What did she say? Not sophisticated? Unromantic? What does she know?
<Friend - Spoken>
Dude, chill out. It’s not a big deal… there will be others. It’s just a girl.
<Me - Spoken>
Just a girl… Yeah, you’re right. You are right! She’s just another girl.
<Verse 1>
She’s just a girl, guys, wait till you see.
More will come around
Than air that you breathe.
Some are the rich snobs who want more and more,
Some are the dirt poor and can’t afford anything anymore.
Guy just treat ‘em right and do what you can,
Just know that some will demand,
And something’s gotta cross their hands.
Guys I’m here to tell you so you know…
<Chorus>
She just another girl!
Give it a shot and if it’s lost,
Kick her to the side and find another girl.
More will come along that’ll suit you better…
Some are needy, some are greedy,
But all there is to know…
She’s just another girl.
<Verse 2>
Take a step back and have look at the world.
In the bigger picture, you should see another girl.
Go ahead and take a shot but I tell you what,
I will guarantee that you will hit some rocks,
What matters is that you gave it a shot.
Totally stuck... Help please!
