Fear-less Good By

[gary bechter]

                               A Fearless Good-By

                            embracing into wee hours
                              within a glancing night
                                 eternities passion
                                   of interim flight

                                      resting ____
                                   in soothing refrain
                               a menthols touch to each

                                     tearless adieus
                                     of wistful sighs _ _ _
                                      softening smiles
                                     a fearless good-by

[Shad]

WOW!

Never lost a beat in this, nice depth and very well executed my friend!

[gary bechter]

[Marguerite]

A menthols touch to each - what a great line!  Great poem of farewell.  M.

[gary bechter]

 thanking you i am ,for the most kind reply.
  a poem may at times read drab,, but just one single
  line may give it the breath of life.

  Gary Bechter.

[gary bechter]

 hey shad. can i write a short story on this site?
  maybe a prose kind of thing ?

   Gary Bechter.