Just lookin for a place to put my work and get critiques. Also, have been entering my lyrics in contests. I am also willing to critique others' work as well. Thanks
Come Back Home
Under oath she swears she’s not alone,
But she’s been up and down the block,
Without much sense and rational,
Her twisted faith reaps under her walk,
The ground can tell when she’s on top,
She’s no super model, no role model
Just a girl living in a lonely world,
I’m your best friend so listen up,
There’s no one more I want to help,
You can be yourself around me,
So why don’t you come back home,
She slides up to the sears tower,
To solicit things she covers,
She’s known all over Las Vegas,
As Miss Alotta Insecure,
No alias she can deny,
She’s no Marilynn Monroe, no Madonna
Just a girl living in a lonely world,
(Chorus)
She runs from city to city,
To prove there’s no one happier,
But tonight there’s no more pity,
For all her friends already know,
She’s running, oh no there she goes,
She’s no summer catch, she’s so far-fetched
Just a girl looking to find herself,
(Chorus)
